tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post9117283305193553934..comments2020-08-04T01:52:16.542-07:00Comments on Blink of an Eye: Chapter 3: A Little Fun TonightLateKnightSimmerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-18790388959796737322014-08-09T11:38:39.823-07:002014-08-09T11:38:39.823-07:00Yeah this guy is a criminal, either that, or he is...Yeah this guy is a criminal, either that, or he is taking advantage of the world in its broken state, and acting on things he would have always liked to do. Very bad man.<br />Sorry for the confusion about the going outside and it being dangerous. People outside are wearing gas masks, and this guy took off his gas mask while he was in their house looting them. Since I wasn't going from the guy's point of view, I didn't show the gas masks in this chapter, but Chapter 5, I think has someone who's wearing a gas mask.<br />She's kind of a wuss, LOL, she's privileged, and nothing like this has ever happened to her, let alone, she never thought it would happen to her, so she's completely unprepared right now.<br />After Chapter 7, you'll find out how these characters are tied together, but I will say now that her husband does not work with the guy in chapters 1 and 2.LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-24584765282746403342014-08-08T21:50:39.926-07:002014-08-08T21:50:39.926-07:00"I just shot him a little bit. He'll be f..."I just shot him a little bit. He'll be fine. I just wanted to have a little fun tonight." O.o he's a creep lol Omg I feel so bad for her....I don't understand why he said she shouldn't go outside since he broke in her house so he must've been outside too. I hope she doesn't let him get what he wants. Put up a fight lady! Lol nice chapter I'm wondering if they have an extra gun in the house and if her husband works with the guy seen in chapter 1 and 2. littlesims2chickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12688461785560031787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-56716604025155303192014-06-26T23:28:51.085-07:002014-06-26T23:28:51.085-07:00Yes it does. I started it with four different main...Yes it does. I started it with four different main characters, so you'll meet the other two later on. These couple chapters, up until chapter 7, are introductions to each of the characters. Pretty much, what happened at each of their houses on the same night to show the chaos that ensues in an apocalyptic world. :) Then later, their story lines will merge somehow...LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-71786244453104316572014-06-25T21:25:05.200-07:002014-06-25T21:25:05.200-07:00So the story follows several characters?? Pretty c...So the story follows several characters?? Pretty cool. Hope her husband isn't dead.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13581242430574034884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-30190645952173187492014-05-19T01:14:23.617-07:002014-05-19T01:14:23.617-07:00Yeah this guy is an asshole. Plain and simple. LOL...Yeah this guy is an asshole. Plain and simple. LOL. Thank you! I'm glad you like the way I'm writing this. :) I did totally want to show a different side of the apocalypse. XD Criminals and just people in general, are taking advantage of the disbanding of the police force and running around like animals.LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-60700176250232567102014-05-18T15:24:05.071-07:002014-05-18T15:24:05.071-07:00Although I dislike this guy and everything he repr...Although I dislike this guy and everything he represents, I'm glad that you've decided to show the darker sides of the apocalypse. I get the sense that society is breaking down and people aren't safe in their own homes. Good job :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-2986400775312066302014-04-16T23:36:03.862-07:002014-04-16T23:36:03.862-07:00Yeah... >:D I'm building suspense, so what ...Yeah... >:D I'm building suspense, so what he says to her is supposed to make you wonder. Her fate will be shown... soon. LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-84146024728518751232014-04-14T02:45:59.330-07:002014-04-14T02:45:59.330-07:00"shot him a little bit" doesn't soun..."shot him a little bit" doesn't sound promising. The poor woman - I'm not sure how she'll get out of this but I really hope someone comes to her rescue.Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412124469602571694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-21262273106590535992014-04-08T10:40:06.346-07:002014-04-08T10:40:06.346-07:00Thank you! :)
Oh hell no describes this chapter ve...Thank you! :)<br />Oh hell no describes this chapter very well, LOL. She's having a terrible, scary ass day. o.OLateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-47587174461402007852014-04-07T05:15:21.506-07:002014-04-07T05:15:21.506-07:00Oh hell no! I hope she knocks him out! That must b...Oh hell no! I hope she knocks him out! That must be so scary! I hope her husband is okay! This story is very exciting!Reagan Powershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08594909156164110559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-92084078513102082502014-03-10T11:56:55.688-07:002014-03-10T11:56:55.688-07:00I know, right? I don't know what it is about t...I know, right? I don't know what it is about the end of the world causing people to act like animals, and lose respect for everyone else, but it seems to be that way. I don't know, I think it's something like they think they're not accountable for anything just because there's chaos. This man is really gross. *holds nose*LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-23698246502771255752014-03-09T22:27:41.393-07:002014-03-09T22:27:41.393-07:00NO! I also would be scared of this. In fact, som...NO! I also would be scared of this. In fact, sometimes I worry about my daughter (she's only 7) having something disgusting like this happen. So, yeah, yuck! Can't stop, though, hopefully she'll beat the crap out of him somehow. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01849731264604925962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-27855077720114666722014-02-28T22:48:45.959-08:002014-02-28T22:48:45.959-08:00Haha, yeah Chapter 4 is the continuation of this c...Haha, yeah Chapter 4 is the continuation of this chapter. The outside is bad at the moment, since the chemical attack just happened, the levels are not safe for humans to breathe, he wasn't lying about that. Fighting is a good option, some people though, in scary situations like this, just freeze because they're too scared. No one really knows what they will do in an actual situation like this, not even me. I'd like to think I would fight, but until I actually get put in a situation like this (hopefully never, LOL) I don't know what I would do. Shock and fear do some really strange things to people.<br />:) Thanks for reading and commenting! LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-10241848660448466192014-02-26T14:46:24.526-08:002014-02-26T14:46:24.526-08:00Taina (post above) is right, I'd for sure not ...Taina (post above) is right, I'd for sure not just stand there waiting for him to have his "little fun". I'd rather take my chances outside or at least fight...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-88041753084867657162014-01-12T14:46:29.009-08:002014-01-12T14:46:29.009-08:00He's a bad... bad.. excuse for a man. Well, sh...He's a bad... bad.. excuse for a man. Well, she's just standing there because she's scared and frozen in place. Apparently, that's her reaction to being put in this type of situation. She was also just standing there cause I left this at a cliffhanger. LOL. That's true, it might not seem that bad, the guy could have been lying to scare her to stay so he can do stuff to her... but mainly, I haven't shown the outside yet, and people at this point were wearing gas masks. This dude isn't cause he's already inside their house.<br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting. :DLateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-85018892179987085542014-01-11T22:35:33.650-08:002014-01-11T22:35:33.650-08:00Excuse me? A little fun? Screw you buddy! Why is s...Excuse me? A little fun? Screw you buddy! Why is she just standing there? I'll take chemical poisoning over rape any day. And if they are walking around, it can't be that bad!Tainahttp://torreslegacy.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-84313587992767774942014-01-03T21:40:11.208-08:002014-01-03T21:40:11.208-08:00*nods* The bad guys are of course, going to take a...*nods* The bad guys are of course, going to take advantage of this, knowing people have no way to protect themselves. Bad guys always get their guns somehow, so the military's logic in the previous chapter was seriously flawed... big time.LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-46988927644137631652014-01-03T11:54:19.338-08:002014-01-03T11:54:19.338-08:00That's why the people need guns, to protect th...That's why the people need guns, to protect themselves from creeps like this! Stupid military! I hope she's going to be okay and some kind soul saves her. Crossing my fingers.sandybeachgirl2https://www.blogger.com/profile/00114726544153905317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-37089263944684325362013-12-23T11:22:05.966-08:002013-12-23T11:22:05.966-08:00This crazy creep doesn't deserve pleasure, tha...This crazy creep doesn't deserve pleasure, that's for sure. LOL. :D<br /><br />Thanks for reading this and commenting, Colorist!LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-43174638102485188792013-12-21T15:14:02.281-08:002013-12-21T15:14:02.281-08:00Oh no how horrible. I hope she gives him what he ...Oh no how horrible. I hope she gives him what he deserves and I ain't talking pleasure lol. Colorist40noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-9333082628790254372013-12-05T10:48:40.368-08:002013-12-05T10:48:40.368-08:00Hi anna! LOLL your comment made me laugh. It does ...Hi anna! LOLL your comment made me laugh. It does seem silly, doesn't it? Hiding under the covers like a small child? =)<br />She is scared shitless right now. We don't know much about her, except that she's married. We can conclude she has no children, or she would have been running to protect them. Her fight or flight instinct kicked in, and she chose flight. She wanted to hide because if there was a gunshot downstairs, she didn't want to run down there and also potentially get shot herself. She was banking on being quiet as a mouse, hoping that the intruders would leave if she could fool them into thinking that there was no one else in the house. However, she obviously failed. ROFL.<br /><br />Thanks so much for reading and commenting! =)LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-69953724672176399802013-12-05T10:44:54.811-08:002013-12-05T10:44:54.811-08:00She is in a sticky situation right now... *bites f...She is in a sticky situation right now... *bites fingernails* Only time will tell if her husband and her will get out of this unscathed. Aww thanks. =) I think it's crazy too, so I'm making myself think about different possibilities from different character perspectives.<br /><br />I'm glad you're enjoying this, and thanks for reading and commenting! =)LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-59731909255019762502013-12-05T10:43:06.421-08:002013-12-05T10:43:06.421-08:00*shudders* This guy is disgusting. I mean, when ap...*shudders* This guy is disgusting. I mean, when apocalypses happen, people's right hands don't just stop working, so I do not understand why some feel the urge to use other people as blow up dolls. I see this all too damn often in end of the world movies. I felt a little bad using it here, but it was a good lead in to what I wanted her story to become, so it worked. All I can say is that I am learning some self defense so I can kick the asses of people like this should I ever need to. You are right too, for some reason, end of the world makes people think they have no consequences, like there's no laws anymore? So not true, and another thing I don't understand about the human mind. LOL. <br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting! =)LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-24012827634440324002013-12-04T23:46:49.865-08:002013-12-04T23:46:49.865-08:00* "can an" My, I am really shocked *lol*...* "can an" My, I am really shocked *lol*annasommerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01284760884033582358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029542002300596703.post-1797603071853360462013-12-04T23:45:58.743-08:002013-12-04T23:45:58.743-08:00I can't believe that she really stayed in her ...I can't believe that she really stayed in her bed when she heard the gunshot downstairs- how and adult person seriously be hiding under the COVERS OF HER BED in a situation like this?!? o.Oannasommerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01284760884033582358noreply@blogger.com